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So I'm trying to create a science fiction war story with a similar objective as the movie "2001 - A Space Odyssey" Basicly just to show some predictions of what the future of war would be like 15 years from now.
What I'm looking for is feedback from people like pilots, and various vehicle crew members on the practicality of some of the units and vehicles I've created for the story, to see what you think and what could possibly improve them from soldiers point of view and ignore financial beuracracy.
I've designed all these with an engineering line thought, all of is theory.
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http://raven-gold.deviantart.com/art/King-Diablo-Redux-136467419
King Diablo Tank. (MK4)
Crew: 3: Driver, Gunner, Commander. Also possible space for 4 passengers.
Weight: 78 Tons
Armour: Super-tensile NeuChrome armour. (Stonger than Titanium-Carbide)
Drive: Electric wheel hub engines powerd by a Depleted Uranium battery. 60km/h flat road speed. (It can keep driving on stop for days without having to replace the battery)
Armament: Twin 113mm Katana Railguns (Gunner), 12mm gatling gun (Gunner), 20mm railgun auto turret (Commander), 17mm railgun forward auto gun (Pilot). (Main guns fire at upto 7 times the speed of sound. Could possibly punch through 3 modern tanks parked one behind the other.)
Extra: Explosive Reactive patches.
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http://raven-gold.deviantart.com/art/YF-41-Splinter-Interceptor-143723658
YF-41 Splinter.
Crew: 1 pilot. (Very advancd computers eliminate the need for a copilot)
Armour: Light Steel frame and carbon-metallic skin
Mass: 23 tons unloaded. 29 tons maximum load.
Armament: 1x 15mm Forward machine gun. 4x Concealed missile bays. Capacity for 6x light air-to-air missiles.
Drive: 2x Pratt & Whitney F119 Turbofan Ethanol Jets. Mach 1.4 top airspeed (Super Cruise). Mach 3.2 (afterburn fuel).
Other: Pitching Thrust Vectors. Optional "Stealth Shield" Cloaking.
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Those are the 2 main ones I want critique about. Heres the gallery of everything I've made if you want to take a look, just note that alot of older stuff I'm going to revise again. http://raven-gold.deviantart.com/gallery/
war;;
What I'm looking for is feedback from people like pilots, and various vehicle crew members on the practicality of some of the units and vehicles I've created for the story, to see what you think and what could possibly improve them from soldiers point of view and ignore financial beuracracy.
I've designed all these with an engineering line thought, all of is theory.
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http://raven-gold.deviantart.com/art/King-Diablo-Redux-136467419
King Diablo Tank. (MK4)
Crew: 3: Driver, Gunner, Commander. Also possible space for 4 passengers.
Weight: 78 Tons
Armour: Super-tensile NeuChrome armour. (Stonger than Titanium-Carbide)
Drive: Electric wheel hub engines powerd by a Depleted Uranium battery. 60km/h flat road speed. (It can keep driving on stop for days without having to replace the battery)
Armament: Twin 113mm Katana Railguns (Gunner), 12mm gatling gun (Gunner), 20mm railgun auto turret (Commander), 17mm railgun forward auto gun (Pilot). (Main guns fire at upto 7 times the speed of sound. Could possibly punch through 3 modern tanks parked one behind the other.)
Extra: Explosive Reactive patches.
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http://raven-gold.deviantart.com/art/YF-41-Splinter-Interceptor-143723658
YF-41 Splinter.
Crew: 1 pilot. (Very advancd computers eliminate the need for a copilot)
Armour: Light Steel frame and carbon-metallic skin
Mass: 23 tons unloaded. 29 tons maximum load.
Armament: 1x 15mm Forward machine gun. 4x Concealed missile bays. Capacity for 6x light air-to-air missiles.
Drive: 2x Pratt & Whitney F119 Turbofan Ethanol Jets. Mach 1.4 top airspeed (Super Cruise). Mach 3.2 (afterburn fuel).
Other: Pitching Thrust Vectors. Optional "Stealth Shield" Cloaking.
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Those are the 2 main ones I want critique about. Heres the gallery of everything I've made if you want to take a look, just note that alot of older stuff I'm going to revise again. http://raven-gold.deviantart.com/gallery/
war;;